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    Contest Winner! Winner of Poetry Contest #272 -- Theme: "Retro Surreal Photo"

    Discussion in 'Bi-Weekly Poetry Contest' started by theoriginalmonsterman, Apr 4, 2016.

    Thanks to everyone who participated in this contest! It always pleases me to see a huge amount of people participating in the poetry contest, so lets keep it up next contest! :D

    The winner of this poetry contest is @srlekhak! @Wreybies will be along sooner or later to award you your metal. Congratulations!

    I won't have the next poetry contest up until a little later, so until then why don't we all take a gander at @srlekhak's poem below.


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    A moment lost !

    I wish I could stand
    Where she is now
    Where I was
    A moment ago

    In between
    Everything there was
    And everything there will be
    In between
    What we call fiction
    And harsh reality

    In between
    The dark black
    And the bright blue
    In between
    Wisdom of the old
    And energy of the new

    In between
    What I was
    And what I had become
    In between
    The clouds and the sun
    The stars and the moon

    In between
    Freedom and captivity
    Distance and proxmity
    In between
    Love and lust
    Deceit and trust


    Somewhere
    Between hope and despair
    Or better
    Somewhere between happiness and mirth
    Or worse


    I would give anything
    To stand where she is now
    To relive the moment
    I lost somehow !
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    Thanks again to everyone who participated!
     
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    Congratulations! I forgot to vote but I really like this poem, it's very good. :)
     
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    Another difficult one to decide. I voted for the runner up but I liked them both. Congrats to both of you. :)
     
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    Thanks everyone ! I am so glad you all liked my poem :)
    Really happy !
     

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