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    Winning Poem From the Weekly Poetry Contest.

    Discussion in 'Bi-Weekly Poetry Contest Archives' started by Raven, Apr 23, 2007.

    Night Haunter


    (Forever Autum)

    Falling falling the leaves of autum rush
    Down with the wind in tow.
    Fallen are we broken we are now.
    Misery stricken our once youthful face's
    Loves wait for us
    yet pain reaps us
    we are the Fallen of those lost.

    Time ticks slow now
    Autum comes with dead leaves falling like dead warriors
    Autum the time for the dead.
    What have I done
    Once young now older than ever.
    My hands look pink but I see the stained blood
    Forever to course me.

    Home I see
    A glimpse of the shadow I once was
    A warrior lost in a world that needs me not
    My heart slows I see my love
    My heart yearns for her once again
    But The shadows taunt me
    Night becomes hell
    The dark reminds me
    the trigger I once pulled killed
    The night stalks me
    Forever and evermore
    I will know no peace again
    The stained blood runs to deep

    For the trigger I pulled killed
    So be it the night stalks me
    As the shadows taunt me
    Forgivness lost to me
    No more shall I see peace
    Forever locked within the battle

    My sight sees the dead watching me
    Happy once never again
    The shadows taunt me
    As the night stalks me.
    Forever autum
    As the leaves fall dead and decayed
    Forever Autum
     
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    What a beautiful poem.
     
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    Congratulations to all who entered and especially to you Night Haunter.
     
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    Well done Night Haunter, it is a wonderful piece and really did deserve to win.

    Congratulations :D:D

    ~Torana
     
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    Congradulations, Night Haunter!
     
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    *clap clap*

    it should be spelled "autumn", though.
     
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    [Quibble warning]

    Jesus Chryst.

    Look - Autumn has got an n on the end.

    And congratulations doesn't have a d.

    Nice poem btw.

    [oops - looks like Myst is quicker on the post button than me]
     
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    brilliant poem night haunter
    Heather
     
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