I have been thinking of an idea for a story and I would love some opinions or any ideas/suggestions. It is sci-fi with a bit of dystopian society thrown in for good measure. here is my idea- Name- Soul Reaper or soul hunter.. have not decided 100% on a name yet. Setting- It is 2050 and the world as we know it has changed significantly. The world is now ruled by a one world government known as G.A.I.A (Globally Allied Imperial Administration ) G.A.I.A claims to have a technology that can read ones soul. With this technology they say they can tell the basic nature of someone. Whether or not that person has it within them to kill. It can also tell what other mortal shells a persons soul has taken in the past. This technology had a rippling effect throughout the world as old religions died hard. It was chaos until the only two ideologies that remained were Buddhism and Atheism. People had all but abandoned the thought of a divine creator. G.A.I.A now uses the Soul reading technology mainly as a policing tool. Squads known as Reapers use the technology to hunt down souls deemed too dangerous. In this world the outlook of many is bleak. Many have given up hope of something better as they live on in poverty. The worlds resources have begun to wear thin and G.A.I.A has rationed all food. Rumors of a rebel group has begun to spread like wild fire. G.A.I.A now scrambles for a means to stop this rebellion. Story idea- The protagonist is named Laslo Skye a member of reaper squad Delta 10. During what was to be a routine job, his mark began speaking wildly of a secret project called Project Deity. He became curious and what he found shocked him. The soul reading technology was a fake technology made as a means of easier population control. It was but one part of a larger project known as Project Deity. Project Deity is a secret project designed to destroy the old view of god and establish a new one. A governmental deity which all would obey. He learns how G.A.I.A will try to establish a religion designed to take advantage of the new bleak global paradigm. He decides to fight against G.A.I.A and spread news of his new discovery. He backs up all the data he found onto a disk and decides to play it quiet for awhile as he plans a way to release it. But as it would turn out his higher ups decide to put him on the high priority soul list as they suspect he saw Project Deity. Laslo now has to fight his fellow brother in arms as he fights to release the truth. He finds that all media outlets are G.A.I.A controlled. After much work he discovers that the rumored rebel group is indeed real. He tells them of what he had found and he plans to release the info. It all comes crashing down however as he soon discovers that the leader of this rebel group is indeed a G.A.I.A agent. Laslo is then thrown in a detention center destined for termination. His proof of Project Deity, was lost. All that remained was the comforting thought that there may actually be a heaven. He meets face to face with a few top agents of G.A.I.A. As they question him on all he knows. Laslo tells him what he believes, and what he knows of project deity. Laslo is then brought to the execution chamber to be killed. As he dies a message appears across all Holographs. It is the crazy man from earlier who originally warned Laslo of project Deity. Laslo managed to free him right after he discovered the proof of Project Deity and gave him a copy. He then faked his termination report to say that he was indeed killed. The G.A.I.A agents all stand in shock as they watch a dead man bring them to their knees. The story ends with the beginning of a revolution and Laslo's wife and son receiving an urn of his ashes in the mail.