So, for this little thing I've got going on, I'm kind of writing a tense battle scene just before the fight for a prologue. I'm not quite sure how to do this, because I've never written anything insanely dramatic and pulsating like that, but I'd like some advice, if possible, or tips on how to go about doing this. It's not meant to be huge, or massively long, but it's supposed to keep the reader excited, anticipating the event, almost to the point where they can taste it but not touch it. Here's what I have so far: The air was thick with charging anticipation, senses electrified beyond the wildest dreams of the imaginative. Hungry for battle, we stood together in our group, each one posed for the fight. Looking back onto the past few months of my life, I never would have suspected my outcome would be as it was now. I figured it could have been worse; I might not have ever met half of the people I knew today, nor understood as much as I do now. My life could have stayed in the same, mindless routine consisting of nothing but superficial tasks while a real war brewed just under my shoes. Unsheathing the two katanas on each side of my hips I leaned forward, staring down the enemy before me. Vast numbers, as many as two dozen, met my gaze, each one drunk with bloodlust. Raising my sword, I charged forward.