Hello everyone, I have been mulling over my story InDanger this week. I am finding things that are missing on it, there have been missing detail and which are improtant. But I reckon there is a good story in there, waiting to come out. I am sure it needs a rethink. I've been planning to have it in short story series. It will be through the eyes of two different characters. It will about dealing the stess of the war experinces they had and how they come terms with it. They both know each other. It will be a tense, sad and dark. But what i feel i need help with is... to how to balanced the action and storytelling?