1. xeromuramasi
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    XeroMuramasi on the case!

    Discussion in 'New Member Introductions' started by xeromuramasi, Apr 23, 2011.

    Well hello guys, I'm Xero, well my real names Johnathon, but still. I recently googled writing forums and it brought me here. I generally write song lyrics when I write but I do write some stories sometimes. Heres actually one of the first songs I ever finished.

    Its not the best but I figured I'd post it here just cause.

    I think about you always
    When I walk down the hallways
    That was a cheap rhyme
    I do it all the time.

    I think about you always
    All the time
    I think about you when I rhyme
    Writin music just to make you smile

    All I want is to make you happy
    All I want is to make you smile
    All I want is to make you happy
    Even if its just for a little while

    I got a bad case
    Of my baby on my brain
    Keep thinkin bout her
    I might go insane

    I don't care
    If they think I'm crazy
    I love you so much baby
    I know in my heart that thats true.

    I think about you always
    All the time
    I think about you when I rhyme
    Writin music just to make you smile

    All I want is to make you happy
    All I want is to make you smile
    All I want is to make you happy
    Even if its just for a little while

    With my baby
    I can take on the world
    With you help baby
    I just might win

    I think about you always
    All the time
    I think about you when I rhyme
    Writin music just to make you smile

    All I want is to make you happy
    All I want is to make you smile
    All I want is to make you happy
    Even if its just for a little while

    I think about you always
    I think about you always
    I think about you always
    I just can't get you off my mind.
     
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    Jayyy1014 Jerrica Contributor

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    Hello, and welcome to the forums. :) hope you enjoy your stay here.
     
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    Cogito Former Mod, Retired Supporter Contributor

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    Hello Jonathan, Welcome to the Creative Writing Forums.

    Please read How to Use the Writing Workshop before you post there. Posting your own writing for people to comment on should not be among the very first things you do here. It is worth taking the time to see what other people have done to improve their writing, and see if some of it applies to your writing as well. That is part of why we require members to review other members' work before posting their own for review. On the other hand, there are no restrictions, other than content and copyright rules, on showcasing your work in your member blog.

    Also, be aware that posting a piece of writing on any public site, including this one, will greatly diminish your chances of selling it for publication. Removing the writing later does not alter that fact - once posted, it is irreversibly considered published. So do not post anything more than a small excerpt of any piece you are planning to submit for publication.

    If you haven't explored the site yet, you should probably do so soon. Newcomers often gravitate to the Lounge, the Word Games, or the Writing Workshop, but there is much more to be discovered if you poke in the corners. Remember to check out our FAQ as well, and be sure to read through the forum rules, too, to avoid any misunderstandings or hurt feelings. Respect for one another is our principal mandate.

    As for the Writing Workshop, new joiners often wonder why we do things a bit differently on this site than on other writing sites. We emphasize constructive critique as a vital writing skill. Training your eye by reviewing other people's work helps you improve your own writing even before you present it for others to see. Therefore, we ask members to review other people's writing before posting work of their own. We also impose a two-week waiting period before you may post writing for critique, to give you time to become familiar with what is expected and how the site operates. The Writing Workshop forums on this site, therefore, are true workshops, not just a bulletin board for displaying your work (and on that note, please only post each item for review in one Writing Workshop forum). Also, please use the same thread for all revisions and additional excerpts from the same piece of writing. See this post, Why Write Reviews Before Posting My Work? for more information.

    And while you're looking around, don't forget to check out the RPG forum for improvisational fiction. Also try our Weekly Short Story Contest and Weekly Poetry Contest. They actually run more than one week apiece, but any member may enter, and all members are urged to vote for their favorites.

    Enjoy your stay here, and have fun!
     
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    Eunoia Contributing Member Contributor

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    Welcome. :)
     
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    Gigi_GNR Guys, come on. WAFFLE-O. Contributor

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