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New Post | da_ardvark 25 Minutes Ago 06:38 PM | Even changing the names will not get you off the hook in some cases. Truman Capote had suit filed against him for "Breakfast at Tiffany’s". I wish we had a simple rule that if you lose in a law suit,... (30 views, 3 replies) | |
New Post | Cogito 31 Minutes Ago 06:32 PM | I'm sorry, but the Review Room is a full participation critiquing workshop for learning to critique effectively, not a place to merely share your work. You are required to post at least two... (6 views, 1 replies) | |
New Post | Prometheus 46 Minutes Ago 06:17 PM | http://i122.photobucket.com/albums/o254/montanaiceweasel/gifs/tumblr_kyrmcwQTHi1qz qgudo1_500.jpg (17,654 views, 2,760 replies) | |
New Post | jacklondonsghost 46 Minutes Ago 06:17 PM | OLP is playing at the old Riviera Theater on Main street where I live. It's sold out though :( (61,954 views, 7,698 replies) | |
New Post | xcomplex 47 Minutes Ago 06:16 PM | You have a really lot of dialogue and this confused me a little. I am not in the most fresh of mind becaus eI am tired but I got lost between who is who. If this is the beginning of your novel I... (62 views, 4 replies) | |
New Post | xcomplex 52 Minutes Ago 06:11 PM | Unfortunatley I have to agree with the others. You really need something more to hook your readers. Maybe start with some action. I don'e mean fighting bombing or crashing but I mean something that... (81 views, 6 replies) | |
New Post | mammamaia 1 Hour Ago 06:01 PM | you're also indulging in the crafting of looooong, fancy sentences that make little sense... simplify!... 'less is more' is still the best axiom for a writer to follow... along with its less... (12 views, 2 replies) | |
New Post | mammamaia 1 Hour Ago 05:53 PM | that's good advice from banzai... it's what i would advise, also... (42 views, 2 replies) | |
New Post | mammamaia 1 Hour Ago 05:44 PM | sounds about right t'me! however, if they're for the YA market, then that word count is ok... for each... but you can't sell a sequel, or a series, without first selling the first book... if and... (61 views, 2 replies) | |
New Post | Prometheus 1 Hour Ago 05:43 PM | Cogito, I'm taking your recommendations very seriously. Not the actual style, I don't think you felt what I was trying to say. (Dig did nail it though. :D ) But the recommendation to shift a lot of... (205 views, 13 replies) | |
New Post | mammamaia 1 Hour Ago 05:37 PM | brava!... you've done a yeowomanlike job of it... nothing more should be needed... (34 views, 2 replies) | |
New Post | Ashleigh 1 Hour Ago 05:24 PM | I don't really have anything lengthy to say about this, but I think it just has alot to do with the delivery of it. Some people only talk about their pride in their country if the conversation... (41 views, 3 replies) | |
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New Post | Manic056 1 Hour Ago 05:16 PM | Gonna be perfectly honest. Don't get it. Do not get it at all. Then again. I'm not a doctor. (10 views, 1 replies) | |
New Post | mammamaia 1 Hour Ago 05:11 PM | how you could go about it is to just sit down and start writing!... ;-) however, you need to know that there's virtually no market for a collection of short stories by an unknown new writer... in... (20 views, 2 replies) | |
New Post | mammamaia 2 Hours Ago 05:01 PM | mm... you are incorrect in so presumptuously assuming what i may or may not assume... in this case, i assumed nothing of the kind and nothing i wrote indicates in any way that i would even think of... (150 views, 12 replies) | |
New Post | nightheart1 2 Hours Ago 04:57 PM | I have to agree with crazycat on the Tamora Pierce books. They are amazing! They aren't exactly the same as all of the other past century books they actually feel real even if is totally fictional. (9,538 views, 283 replies) | |
New Post | Camille 2 Hours Ago 04:57 PM | I also agree with the show don't tell, and I had not thought about the suspense, but I love the idea now. It is a prologue, because the story begins six years later and the prologue does not... (161 views, 12 replies) | |
New Post | nightheart1 2 Hours Ago 04:54 PM | The books are WAY better than the movies. The movies in my opinion sucked horribly. I hated them I just felt that the movies didn't catch half the essence of the books. I love the books and still do... (564 views, 29 replies) | |
New Post | mammamaia 2 Hours Ago 04:48 PM | bienvenue aux forums, zed! if you need any tranlation help, please feel free to email me any time, since je parle/ecrit un peu de francais and i help writers in all parts of the world, to many of... (36 views, 3 replies) |