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    Writing autistic characters

    Discussion in 'Articles' started by mashers, Aug 7, 2017.

    Why write autistic characters?
    Recognition of autism is improving as society learns more about what it means to be autistic. We now recognise that autism is prevalent throughout many aspects of society, and are understanding more and more about both the challenges and advantages it brings. It is statistically likely that everybody knows somebody with autism, whether that person knows they are autistic or not. And it is for this reason that I think there should be more autistic characters in literature. Autism is part of the human experience, bringing a unique and sometimes quirky perspective and novel ways of solving problems. These factors alone create the potential for autism to influence character and plot in interesting ways.

    What is autism?
    Autism is a congenital neurological difference which results in altered perception and information processing. This might sound very different to other descriptions of autism, which often focus on impairments, disabilities and social difficulties. However, these difficulties are secondary to the main difference in autism. Think of the brain as a computer; there are inputs (keyboards, mice, touch screens etc), which are akin to the senses, and there are outputs (displays, speakers and hardware devices) which resemble human communication, movement and action. Between the input and the output is the processor, which is what makes sense of the input and decides on the most appropriate output.

    In autism, the inputs (i.e. the senses) work differently. Some of them are more sensitive than usual, some of them are less so. This can mean hyper-sensitivity to certain senses, such as finding light over a certain brightness or noise which is relatively quiet very overwhelming. Conversely, hypo-sensitivity can lead to things like not noticing certain sensations and therefore craving them in order to feel regulated; this is often associated with the need to spin around or flap limbs, which are due to reduced vestibular and proprioceptive senses.

    The effect of all this is that information is processed differently by the brain. Things to which the person is hyper-sensitive is given a higher priority, because it is the most demanding of attention. Things to which they are hypo-sensitive is given reduced priority, because it is unnoticed or not considered to be important. And the processing of information, which is required in order to understand it, is slowed down or altered by the overwhelming amount of stimulation which is bombarding the person at any given time.

    The reason why this affects social interaction is complicated. First, in this whirlwind of sensory information, social behaviours from other people may simply not be noticed. I don’t see that you are angry because my visual cortex is burned out trying to ignore the patterns on the wallpaper. Or I can’t take in your tone of voice because the police siren down the street is too distressing. As children, this means that autistic people often miss opportunities to learn about social interaction by observing it in others. Furthermore, people are often very unpredictable, and in a world consisting of overwhelming sensory information, autistic people tend to be drawn to things which are consistent and safe. This is the reason why autistic people often withdraw from social situations. The sensory onslaught is overwhelming, and the social demands too great to cope with. This leads to huge amounts of stress, fatigue, and ultimately shutdown.

    That all sounds terrible. Why would I want to include an autistic character in my writing?
    The same aspects of altered sensory and information processing which cause a lot of turmoil for autistic people also brings many gifts. Sensory hyper-sensitivity can lead to amazing attention to detail, noticing things that others wouldn’t (or couldn’t). Hypo-sensitivity can be more of a challenge, but at times can work well, such as by filtering out irrelevant stimuli which might be distracting to other people. This can help massively with focus. On the subject of attention, it tends to be single-channeled in autism, rather than multitasking. This means that autistic people can focus strongly on one thing at a time, and with such strong focus to the exclusion of all else they can accomplish more in a shorter space of time. Interests for people with autism tend to be narrow, and this allows them to learn huge amounts of information and develop amazing skills within these interests. This is partly due to the search for safe consistency previously noted, and partly because once a motivating interest is found it tends to become a passion. In childhood this looks like obsessions (such as loving a particular cup and spinning it round and round over and over again), and in adulthood it tends to mean a narrow focus on particular topic areas.

    For these reasons, autistic characters in fiction can provide an interesting perspective. They will notice things around them in ways which other characters don’t. Some things that the reader might expect them to be aware of will go unnoticed, and this will cause confusion and misunderstandings for the characters. They will read different things in to other people’s intentions, and will solve problems in different ways. They will interpret situations differently, and can present these interpretations in ways which can intrigue readers and make them think about their own perceptions of the environment around them - not to mention the people within it.

    How to write a good autistic character
    I am by no means claiming to be an authority on writing. Far from it - I am an amateur at best. But I am a specialist in autism by profession, know many autistic people, have autistic relatives, and am on the autism spectrum myself. So I do know a lot about autism, what it is, and more importantly, what it is not. So here are my tips on how to portray autism in a way which will accurately reflect the truth of its differences, while at the same time allowing your reader to empathise with the character.

    Meet real people with autism
    Characters in fiction will portray their surface behaviours, and perhaps some of their inner monologue and thought processes. But they won’t really explore the processing that is going on under the surface. So you might see that a character is covering their ears when a train goes by, and they might even say that the sound is unbearable, but you won’t necessarily get deep insight into how that affects that person at the time (e.g. that when they are experiencing am overwhelming stimulus in one sensory modality they are unable to process information from other senses). Also, they probably won’t explain how this experience affects them moving on from there, i.e. the time it takes for the sensory system to return to baseline. You might also see the social difficulties they have, but not necessarily the reasons for them. It is important to understand not only what’s going on on the surface, but also the processing differences which are associated with them. And the best person to tell you about those things is a person with autism.

    Read autobiographies about autistic people
    Wenn Lawson, Ros Blackburn, Clare Sainsbury, Jim Sinclair, Zaffy Simone... these and other autistic adults can tell you, from a first-hand perspective, what it is like to experience the world as an autistic person. Reading their accounts will help you get inside the mind of an autistic person and take their POV.

    Beware of stereotypes
    Rain Man has a lot to answer for. As does The Big Bang Theory. These are catchphrase characters who portray stereotypical autistic traits. Outside of fiction, we are bombarded by historical figures who are posthumously diagnosed with autism. Mozart, Einstein, Lewis Carrol and Alan Turing are all touted as autistic, and all on the grounds of genius or prodigious abilities and/or an aloof manner with people. Yes these can be characteristics of autism, but not necessarily. Focusing on these traits and basing ostensibly autistic characters on them risks giving a stereotyped and two-dimensional view of autism. So don't write a character who flaps his hands and hums to himself and repeats the same phrases over and over again. Yes some autistic people do those things, and yes your character might do them at some points. But if it's all they do, and if you don't explain why they are doing, your character will seem shallow. This is unfulfilling for readers, deprives them of an opportunity to learn about autism in an enjoyable way, and is annoying for people with autism!

    Get empathy right
    It is a myth that people with autism lack empathy. There are two main types of empathy: cognitive, and affective. Cognitive empathy is the ability to understand other people’s thoughts, feelings and perspectives, and affective empathy is the ability to share in and reciprocate others’ feelings. In autism, affective empathy is intact, but cognitive empathy is harder to achieve due to the information processing differences. So autistic people care about other people’s feelings but often have difficulty working out what those feelings are. The opposite scenario (being aware of others’ feelings but not caring about them) would be a sociopathic presentation, not autistic. In short, autistic people do care about others, but struggle to understand them well enough to know what to care about. Getting this right when writing an autistic character is crucial not only in accurately portraying them as autistic, but also in correctly writing from their POV. Difficulties with cognitive empathy affect what you know, or more accurately what you can hypothesise, about other people. So you will need to bear in mind what information your autistic character will be able to work out from other people and from the context, and what will remain unknowable to them.

    Explain behaviours which will seem unusual to the reader
    Autistic characters will misunderstand things. They will say the wrong thing and upset people. They will fail to notice certain important things. They will behave in ways which seem odd or even selfish. If you don’t make it clear to the reader why they are doing those things, then they will come across as unpleasant. The reader needs to know what is causing them to think or behave that way. Just telling the reader that the character is autistic isn’t enough. Not everybody understands autism. Furthermore, it is entirely possible for autistic people to do unkind or unpleasant things intentionally, i.e. not due to their autism but out of choice - just like a non-autistic person can. So you need to differentiate when your character has done something unusual or unexpected because of something related to autism, and when they do it for another reason.

    I have found when writing an autistic character’s POV chapters that inner monologue features heavily. A lot of this consists of describing the character’s experience of the environment - what is distracting him, what is overwhelming to him, what does he understand? It is also useful for showing his intentions. For example, he knows that another character is showing an ‘upset face’, because he thinks back to a time when he learned the meaning of this expression. He goes through a process of trying to work out the reason for this reaction from the other person, but cannot do it. His response is inappropriate, because he misjudges the other character’s state of mind. Without the explanation of his thought process he could appear uncaring. But showing that his intention was to understand will help the reader to empathise when he gets it wrong.

    Include the sensory experiences of the character
    This is something which would go without saying for any other character - you write about what they can see, hear, smell etc. But for an autistic character, the sensory experience will be very different. Before you start writing, you should devise a sensory profile for the character. What are they hyper-sensitive to? What are they hypo-sensitive to? The hyper-sensitivities will be at the forefront of their experiences as they will dominate their consciousness. The hypo-sensitivities won’t be noticed by the autistic character, so should not be mentioned. However, they can be alluded to in the character’s interactions with the environment and people within it. For example, bumping into things they haven’t noticed, eating something poisonous because they have limited sense of smell/taste, misunderstanding people due to lack of awareness of their face etc. You need to establish these things before you start writing in order to ensure your character is consistent. In reality, these things wax and wane - nobody is hyper- or hypo-sensitive to the same things all the time. But in fiction, it might be better to stick roughly to the same set of things, or at least indicate the reason why it has changed (e.g. somebody who is now in a safe, quiet place where they can regulate themselves could become more aware of things to which they were hypo-sensitive when previously overwhelmed and overstimulated). A really good example of describing sensory issues is The Curious Incident of the Dog in the Night-Time by Mark Haddon. I strongly recommend reading it to anyone who wants to write an autistic character.

    Use close first or third person POV
    There are things that autistic people will feel and experience that they can’t explain, or that they won’t feel are important to communicate to others. For example, a person with autism might feel incredible sadness about something, but not tell anyone about it if they do not perceive that doing so will change this situation. To put it another way, the act of sharing their feelings with another is functional, not social. If there is no functional reason to do it, then they may well keep their feelings to themselves. When autistic people do express their feelings, they might do it in a way which is different to other (non-autistic) people. For these reason, you will need to be able to report what the character is feeling. First person perspective means you can report this directly, but brings with it the complication that the character themselves may not understand what they are feeling. Close third person allows you to report the sensations they are experiencing and how they interpret them, but not necessarily what it is they are “actually” feeling. There are pitfalls to both, but the main thing to bear in mind is that it is even more important to avoid an omniscient POV. You cannot report everything about what the autistic character is thinking and feeling, because that will not all be accessible from their own POV. Similarly, you can only report things about other characters of which the autistic character would be aware; you can’t switch to omniscient POV and start talking about other characters’ feelings, because this would circumvent the issues of cognitive empathy present in autism.

    Don’t make everything about the autism
    Autistic people are people just like any other. And just as it would be a bad idea to make a character whose every thought, word and action was all about their gender, race or sexuality, it would be really tiresome of an autistic character was written this way. There should be aspects of the character which are not related to their autism. If not, the character will seem two-dimensional and under-developed.

    Like in real life, autism can either be a burden or an enriching alternative to the usual way of seeing things. The difference is all in how you see it, and how you understand it. Getting inside the POV of an autistic person isn't easy for people who aren't autistic, but if you can achieve it you will find that the experience will open your mind to new ways of seeing the world. And if you can include that effectively in your fiction, I believe it can add an interesting new element for your reader.

    I might come up with other ideas for writing autistic characters, and will update as and when I do :)
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Discussion in 'Articles' started by mashers, Aug 7, 2017.

    1. Shadowfax
      This sounds like "crazy is crazy; they're all the same".

      Yes, there are similarities between many types on mental illness. There are also differences. Otherwise, how would anybody be able to TELL the difference?

      And if you're just going to write a schizophrenic as "tics (a tick is a tiny insect, or a mark you make in a box) and actions" you're going to miss the point entirely, and end up with a very stereotypical "crazy" person.
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    2. mashers
      My concern about that approach is that it leads to stereotyped characters. If you focus on the surface behaviours, you’ll get inconsistent characters who tick the “autism boxes” but aren’t accurate portrayals of autism (or schizophrenia for that matter). It’s more important to understand how that person thinks than how they behave.
      Alan Aspie, T_L_K and izzybot like this.
    3. GrahamLewis
      I take gentle umbrage with the suggestion that autistic equals crazy, My son is autistic but he is not out of touch with reality, just the neurotypical's particular spin on it.
      Alan Aspie likes this.
    4. EstherMayRose
      I think that that's what Shadowfax was also offended at.
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    5. ChickenFreak
      Yes; I absolutely wouldn't call autism a mental illness. The fact that they both may influence behavior doesn't make them related or similar things.
      Alan Aspie and izzybot like this.
    6. GrahamLewis
      You are right Esther. I meant to say autism does not equal mental illness.
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    7. stormjinx
      Thanks for this. Gives me inspiration to perhaps try my hand at writing an autistic character...
      I have a friend with Aspergers, so I can use some things I've learned from her mannerisms etc- with her consent, of course.

      I love diversity in books, movies, etc. I feel like representation is important, and having characters with varying quirks, personalities, and sensory perceptions makes everything more interesting, as well as believable.
      Alan Aspie likes this.
    8. WriteNotHide
      A very interesting aspect. Writing means discovery.
      Alan Aspie likes this.
    9. Mark Burton
      Mark Burton
      I like this article, it is very informative and accurate but I think it can be expanded on a little too. Many people with autism develop not only sensory variations from neurotypicals but also processing ones too. So, as an example, an autistic person might develop a very involved special interest in the field of farm implements of the ancient Mesopotamians to the exclusion of other things, such as relationships with others, eating and school work. Neurotypical people would consider this an unhealthy obsession, but we do need experts in this world and many autistic people end up as experts in very specific and sometimes obscure fields. When writing a character that has such a special interest, they often exhibit a myopia when it comes to other aspects of their lives or even their political, social and economic wellbeing, but exhibit a wealth of knowledge and an internal drive when it comes to their special interest.
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    10. mashers
      Thanks @Mark Burton, that's a really good point. I overlooked the special interest aspect of autism for some reason, and it's an important one. This is often portrayed in characterisations of autism and it is rather fundamental.
      Alan Aspie and Mark Burton like this.
    11. Danyal
      Read The Curious Incident of the Dog in the Night-Time you gain a lot of insight and it'll help with creating an autistic character as well, its been made a play and I can say its brilliant.
      Humei and T_L_K like this.
    12. GrahamLewis
      I have an autistic son and I too loved that book. I gave a copy to one of his therapists and she had the same reaction.
    13. ThunderAngel
      "In autism, the inputs (i.e. the senses) work differently. Some of them are more sensitive than usual, some of them are less so. This can mean hyper-sensitivity to certain senses, such as finding light over a certain brightness or noise which is relatively quiet very overwhelming."

      I've never been diagnosed with it but I'm wondering if a person can have hyper-sensitivity to certain sounds without it, as there are a number of sounds that can send me out of a room.
      Alan Aspie likes this.
    14. izzybot
      Sounds like misophonia.
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    15. ThunderAngel
      Thanks for the info. :) I did some checking and it appears that misophonia is the likely culprit.
    16. mashers
      Agreed - Curious Incident is an amazing portrayal of an autistic person.
    17. Alan Aspie
      Alan Aspie
      Big,, big, big thanks to mashers. Very good text.

      1. Why? Typical intellectual or creative steps came from neurotypical peoples. A-typical steps come from other than typical peoples.

      All intellectual and creative top is neurologically a-typical. It is not typical to do something none else can do.

      2. Don't think about impressions. Think about reality behind impressions. Don't focus on substance of personal traits. Put your focus on dynamics that leades to that substance.

      3. - Neurotypicals can identify themselves with almost everyone else. We can't.
      - Empathy is 2-way road. It is not some persons trait, but some situations trait. If I speak finish and you speak polish it is not my trait or your trait that there are difficulties. It is situations trait.
      - Don't use psychological explanations where situational or sensory explanations work well.

      4. Try to use biological understanding if possible. Psychological explanations are almost never correct.

      5. Use numbers to undestand things if you can.

      If I feel 90°C in sauna about the same way you feel 60°C then you should not try to find other explanations. If Anne hears 60dB voice as loud as you hear 85dB, you should tell it, not something else. If I walk with broken leg it is not because wanting to show but because I manage the pain and must walk somewhere for some reason. If...

      6. Sharing feelings can be social. It can be social only if sharing makes them shared.

      I use words to express my feelings. If someone can't take words as a big and honest thing if there is no nonverbal drama, then there is no point in telling him/her about my feelings.

      If someone "interprets" my words according to his/her personal knolidge, there is no way he/she can get what I am saying. He/she will hear his/her own thinking and experiences, not my words. No point in emotional communication.

      7. We don't think that being NT explains totally all that NT:s do, say or can't.
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    18. Alan Aspie
      Alan Aspie
      I suggest that you study different types of story arch types and pay attention to possible similarities with autistic spectrum.

      If we took away autistic traits from usual arch types, we would have much less of them. And they would be boring.
    19. Alan Aspie
      Alan Aspie
      It helps to understand differencies if you konw that all senses have many senses inside them. And all of those "subsenses" work mostly individually. They are complete systems.

      For instance tactile sense...

      You have one system that..
      1. Senses pressure in skin surface.
      2. Senses pressure deeper.
      3. Senses pain that comes from certain nerves damaging.
      4. Senses heat.
      5. Senses cold.
      6. Senses balance.
      7. Senses proprioception.
      8. Senses thirst.
      9. Senses hunger.
      10. Senses salt balance.
      11. Senses sexual arousal.
      12. Senses energy levels. (Brisk/tired)
      and some more.

      They all are complete systems. They all can be hypo or hyper no matter what some other system is. So the number of possible combinations is huge.
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    20. mashers
      Thanks for your comments and contributions @Alan Aspie. These are really interesting comments! I had a feeling you might comment on this article when I saw your username on another thread ;)
      Alan Aspie likes this.
    21. Alan Aspie
      Alan Aspie
      What did you find interesting?

      My username really does hint something?

      "Aspergers - Probably the Best Syndrome in the World!"
    22. BookWhispers
      Very informative article! It is needed to show any marginal group of characters in book but, at the same time, it is such a sensitive topic as it is hard to write it the right way.
    23. Richach
      Just discovered this fantastic article. I have an autistic character in my WIP, she has only been introduced thus far, but she will play a very significant part in future stories. I don't really know anybody with autism apart from a second nephew and he spends his time only with immediate family. The inspiration for my character was Sir Chris Packham, he is very public about his autism but he is just one example, although clearly inspirational. I plan to study this resource to give me a rounded appreciation. Very, very helpful.
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    24. A_Jones
      As someone who identifies as autistic this was an interesting read. I wanted to add something that people often forget to include. Mimicry. We often tend to repeat things people say, even sound effect people make, without even realizing it. And if someone tells us something, we will repeat that information to people as fact for a while before we remember to stop and think about why we are doing that and if it is correct.

      We have been misrepresented in media so much, I have gotten to the point where I just forgive it all, but I love that people are starting to try.
    25. Professor What
      Professor What
      I really enjoyed reading this article. I've not been diagnosed, but I've recently been "confronted" with the idea that I have Asperger's, and honestly, as I've learned about it, it would be a shock if I don't have it. I don't make any bones about the fact that I'm an odd person. I don't relate well to most people, and there are a lot of things about me that don't even make sense to me a lot of times. That doesn't mean that I'm some sort of freak like pop culture tends to suggest. (I really hate The Big Bang Theory because of that. I hated it over that long before I came to suspect my own autism.) I appreciate the fact that someone would want to take an autistic character and present them in a positive light, digging into their humanity.

      I've done almost nothing to develop it yet, but I have an idea for a couple of characters where one has Asperger's and the other is "normal," where their personal strengths compliment each other. This makes me want to put some more thought into that idea. Thanks for writing this.

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