Blog entries by ITBA01

  1. After taking two weeks off, hoping to gain a more objective view point, I've started reading through my first draft today. As of now, I'm halfway through, and I can honestly say that it's quite awful. The plot is all over the place, and I feel that the characters aren't developed nearly enough. The descriptions are especially bad, mostly do to the repetition of certain worlds (especially...
  2. I've been working on my first draft since late November, and I'm around halfway done at this point. It's incredibly clunky at this point, and is about as bare bones as a story can get, but I'm glad that I've at least gotten some work done. I was hoping to get some criticism for my writing, so I wanted to post a brief bit from one of my earlier chapters here. Any type of criticism is welcome,...
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