imma newcomer here soo heres one of the poems i wrote, please comment and leave any tips or whatever :]..its called Time Tick Tock, Tick Tock Time What is time? Time is an Illusion As time runs out, As every second goes by We never realize... Why? When your time is almost up You start to think... Why did i do that? You may reflect and may regret You never really know Till its time to go When its too late As your last seconds go by You may tell your secrets... Say your goodbyes... Until its time to die Slowly you feel your eyes close As you drift into a permenate sleep Death welcomes you As you cower and fight Not ready to leave But Death is smart. Cunning And lets you fight Leaves you to struggle against an impossible battle You feel yourself growing weaker... Weaker As Death mocks you You then accept your fate And admit you have lost For your time has run out And you have no energy to spare The warm embrace calms you And you realize and accept Sometimes Death knows best That time doesnt matter anymore... Not a minute. Not a second. Because your time is Gone.