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  1. What I Want to Say Vs. What I Really Want to Say - Going Beyond Clarity

    Am I nailing it when I fullfill what I want to say? This thought came to me while contemplating a critique on someone’s story ( not here ) and then working on my own. I found myself doing what I was shaking my head at. Guilty! During the dialogue exchange, the physical reactions had been reduced to stock motions; he laughed, he grinned, he raised an eyebrow, he looked. Simple phrases that in the end dragged the story down an ordinary path. The occasional interesting event or phrase...
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