My Very First Poem I Have Ever Written! It's About Vampires And Us Humans.

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  1. OF DARKNESS AND SIN

    Of blood and darkness do these creatures feed...
    Of strength and power do these creatures breed...
    Lust and beauty do these pale creatures need...
    To walk among the humans, among the day under the sun once more and plant their seed...
    The desire to be human, to age and to die, are what these poor trapped and immortal souls never will get to be...
    From the dark beds in which they rise, doomed to lead their eternal, cursed lives, one must look into their eyes, to see if they possess a soul indeed and in need...
    But yet 'tis said they possess no heart, but then one must wonder how they can also feel and to bleed...
    To become a vampire would likely be a great, terrifying deed...
    To possess the strength and the power of the supernatural, the simply unheard of, but could you cope with the price you would pay for your eventual misdeeds...?
    For we humans are much, much to often mislead, hardly ever to pay the price, the true price, for our greed...
    But yet if one were to become this blood sucking fiend, you'd likely soon regret all that you have lost and once had, knowing that you certainly should have listened, should have taken heed...
    For now you are stuck to be this eternal creature of darkness forever so it seems...
    To be the very creature that you have deemed...

    And there it is! I have to say I'm rather proud of it myself. :D Hope you guys (and gals) like my poem!
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Comments

  1. Kitkat094
    This piece is amazing. I would not have know it was your first poem had it not been for the title. my favorite line "But yet 'tis said they possess no heart, but then one must wonder how they can also feel and to bleed..." the depth and contradiction are astounding. Honestly, out the mild spelling error "hardly ever to pay the price, the true prce, for our greed..." there is not one thing I think I would change. Keep up the good work. Can't wait to see how you develop your poetry.
  2. writingismypassion
    Thankyou for the great comment! I am glad you like it! And yes, it really is my first poem ever written. :D I fixed my mistake of the prce to price, as it is supposed to be. I do have a second poem I have written that I plan on posting one of these days.
  3. summerrain
    A very intriguing, albeit frightening, poetic lesson on vampires for me. I never knew these creatures could breed. eeww. I thought they went from one adult to the other, sucking away. Good work!
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