Night Song

By Cogito · Mar 31, 2008 · ·
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  1. This was my entry in the first Writing Trinity poetry competition on the site, for which the challenge was to weave the words mahogany, dreaming, and afterthought into a poem. Although I did not win, I anm happy with the way the poem turned out.

    The warmth of your body melts into me
    musk and patchouli, your fragrance divine
    a cinnamon afterthought wafts from your lips
    I lie wrapped around you, at consummate peace
    jealous moon watches from October skies
    as the world of my thoughts is solely comprised
    of mahogany skin, and caramel eyes

    The tide of your breathing, a somnolent sea
    A moan escapes you as dreaming you lie
    You wake for a moment, and grant me a smile
    then settle in closer and we both drift asleep
    lonely moon watches from October skies
    but the world of my thoughts is solely comprised
    of your satin mahogany skin,
    and your sparkling caramel eyes.
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Comments

  1. ChristiMac
    I really like it! I'm amazed it didn't win, it's amazing.
  2. Torana
    Well Cogito you know you had my vote in this contest. It was an amazing piece and truely poetic.

    The first line of the second stanza really is amazing and leaves a lasting impression upon my mind. Brilliantly written my friend. Marvellous imagery.

    Torana
  3. Luminous
    This is lovely, sensual, and I have to say, kind of sexy.

    I love it.
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