Blue Phoenix (Old version) released on Short Story Thread

Hello everybody, just dropping by to say i released my really old, short, and crappy version of Blue Phoenix. I wrote it for school, so it's kinda corny. The one im working on is much different in almost every way. I explain in the post. So if you have time to read it, go ahead and check it out. Oh and i had to rush it a bit so it might suck a bit XD. Anyway, later!