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Thanks so much for this link. i was having so much trouble thinking of names and this is perfect. thank you!
The first thing that seemed out of place was the "second day loving him" and the first day saying "I can't make it to the airport". Makes no sense unless your female character is intentionally weird. I did not sense a thesis also. What is it? His going, her ambivalence?? Everything MUST support the thesis.
Separate names with a comma.