Clarity

By Richach · Feb 13, 2020 · ·
  1. I love reading or listening to someone that can convey a message clearly. Especially when the subject matter is complex. Way beyond my normal reckoning but they can still get 'El Thicko! (me) to understand the message or the story. There is little point being a clever clogs if you cant share what you have to say.

    Take Professor Brian Cox a physicist who lectures in particle physics at the school of physics and astronomy at Manchester University, England. He also presents a programme called the planets on the BBC. He uses simple everyday language to convey his understanding of a black hole, or how the universe began. Never trying to find obscure, peculiar or less often used words for the sake of it. Of course he doesn't need to as he knows his subject very well. Proof of his unique skill is that I can sit and watch an episode of the planets and feel I understand every word. Then I try and explain to someone else what I have just watched and it all unravels very quickly into a big mess. It quickly becomes apparent that I am not an astrophysicist and I don't do on the hoof presentations of complex subjects. Or at least not in a live situation. I much prefer to take as much time as is needed to clarify and simplify the intention. (story) This can take months or even years.

    I believe very strongly that if you cannot communicate your ideas then you should try harder to do so. If you have something to say but you are not able to say it in a way that people understand then don't say it. At least not until you are able to communicate your ideas or knowledge more effectively. Further understand the audience. They are not stupid just because the idea was not delivered clearly.

    Let me clarify, when I write, I use everyday language and simple structures to convey my ideas. I really don't see the point in distracting the reader from the narrative by showing off. I would rather write like Roald Dahl than Dickens although Tolkien is a nice compromise. Yes I am a middle-grade author but I think communicating with the masses is key. Only then can a message be conveyed and not lost in a complex narrative. Even clearly delivered simple notions may be conceived after the fact to be a work of genius.

    As yet I am not the author that I wish to be, but I am heading in the right direction. All be it slowly.
    Larro, GrahamLewis, Some Guy and 2 others like this.

Comments

  1. Some Guy
    Take me with you.
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  2. GrahamLewis
    Rich, I appreciate what you are saying.

    I would only add that in my experience sharing knowledge orally, a situation in which words flow, is a lot different than sharing it in writing, when ideas are trapped on paper (or monitor screens).

    I happen to be married to a scientist who travels the world to explain and comment on science applications in her field. The feedback she gets is that she communicates so clearly and without agenda, and has a solid and sincere understanding whereof she speaks.

    That said, she is not as good at written communication, though getting better. She often turns to me for editing assistance. Because even though I have but limited understanding of her field (though I am learning a lot through osmosis), even though I may not much know whereof I speak, I do know better how to make written words work.

    The same with when I was practicing law. Other, better-paid, lawyers were more eloquent in the courtroom or schmoozing with clients on the phone, but I was the one who took their letters and their briefs and "prettied" them up.

    Bottom line, IMHO, TED talks and books have little in common, except that they both use words. Some people are better in one or the other, a very few are eloquent in both.
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  3. Richach
    Yes I quite agree. I think as long as the words are delivered clearly, be it by spoken or written word, then the message can be delivered and understood by a wide audience. Save of course if you are a crime or mystery writer. Then it would be a case of setting obstacles for the reader. I have not got that far yet.
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