Most of a year ago, I wrapped Part One of Lives in Time, my WIP. My friend Steve, an author of some renown, offered to read it and give feedback, which I readily accepted. His review is posted in my blog below, titled Feedback if you're interested. It's good material.
Today, after letting the work languish for quite a while, I started the long, arduous process of editing. I'm relying on Steve's feedback, as well as that of another author friend, to guide me. It's difficult, though.
One thing I did notice, after letting the work settle, is that I had (probably still have) a habit of making lengthy paragraphs that were really several paragraphs chained together. I broke them into two (sometimes three) pieces, and now the work reads better. The simple addition of a few carriage returns helped the flow of the work dramatically.
Now just to go back and fix the "show versus tell" business, which will be harder. :|
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