LordKyleOfEarth Oct 10, 2010
I'm sorry for you loss. I lost my best friend unexpectedly and it tore me apart, I found myself at the bottom of a hole three years later, and have been trying to fix things every since. If you ever need to talk, shoot me a message; it helps more than you may think.

As far the poem, I feel its too abstract. You have lots of images, but nothing tangible to hold them together.