Levels Of Curiosity. By: Isabelle Torres (Sneak Preview!)h

By isabelletorres · Jul 30, 2011 · 326 · 2
  1. So guys, here it is! My exclusive sneak preview of my work in progress: Levels Of Curiosity:)


    It was beautiful. The way the moonlight hit across the lake. It was glimmering, like diamonds. I was dazzled. I would have never thought that somebody like me could find this place. This magical realm of darkness and power. Even with the dark side of it, I couldn't help to think, what haven't I seen yet? In the past few days, I don't think anything
    could be possible anymore. I started to doze off under the moon. Then, I saw it. In my mind, I could see a vision. These visions only happened every so often, but now, I could sense it was real. I had to warn everybody. We must prepare. For the one thing I never thought I would be able to do; battle.


    Hope you guys are as excited as I am!!

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  1. mugen shiyo
    Moonlight...glimmering...darkness and power...I like how that sounds.

    It's all very rushed and doesn't reveal enough to grasp on to. A sneak peak should be like the preface of a book or something. It gives a little more details while holding back. Your excitement itself i what makes me curious, but hope to see your story here sometime.

    later :p
    mugen shiyo, Jul 30, 2011
  2. Radrook
    Well, it is dramatic enough to make me want to know what comes next.
    Radrook, Jul 30, 2011
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