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imma newcomer here soo heres one of the poems i wrote, please comment and leave any tips or whatever :]..its called Time

Tick Tock, Tick Tock
Time
What is time?
Time is an Illusion
As time runs out,
As every second goes by
We never realize...
Why?

When your time is almost up
You start to think...
Why did i do that?
You may reflect and may regret
You never really know
Till its time to go
When its too late

As your last seconds go by
You may tell your secrets...
Say your goodbyes...
Until its time to die

Slowly you feel your eyes close
As you drift into a permenate sleep
Death welcomes you
As you cower and fight
Not ready to leave

But Death is smart. Cunning
And lets you fight
Leaves you to struggle against an impossible battle
You feel yourself growing weaker...
Weaker
As Death mocks you

You then accept your fate
And admit you have lost
For your time has run out
And you have no energy to spare

The warm embrace calms you
And you realize and accept
Sometimes Death knows best
That time doesnt matter anymore...
Not a minute. Not a second.
Because your time is Gone.