The King

By Nightsong · May 16, 2009 · 487 · 1
  1. I like this poem too much to put it in the review room. I'm aware of its many flaws, but due to the deep meaning it has for me I just can't bear to change it.

    The King
    The Lost One, trapped in blackened flame;
    King of Shadows; fire's bane.
    Replication of callous life;
    Connisseur of deadly strife.
    Reaper with illusions face,
    Focused on malicious chase.
    Haunting the realm of ancient dreams,
    Pulling at its precious seams.
    Step slowly through the bloodstained door
    Encounter light, and dream no more.

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  1. jonathan hernandez13
    very pretty, I can see why you dont want to post it, someone will try to tell you to change something and it doesn't need to be changed. Don't really know the context of the poem, but it doesn't matter, I still like it.:p
    jonathan hernandez13, May 21, 2009
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