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Published by poeticheart89 in the blog poeticheart89's blog. Views: 77

I will not try to win your heart
by offering you a materialistic start.
All I offer is what I own
and a future into the great unknown.

I place my heart in your hands
to which I hope that you will understand,
the need I have to be with you
with a promise that I will be forever true.

With the sun setting in the east
the pale moon light foressing a night a peace.
Together we could cherish the morning light
holding onto each other tight.

Will all I have I promise you
all of me and all that is true.
With all I give and trust in your hands
I hope and pray we will both stand.

There is nothing left I hide from you
offering a promise that I will be forever true.
All I offer is what I own
and a future into the great unknown.



I wrote this for a class assignment and I haven't quite finished it but what I've read I"m not sure if it needs something more or should I just leave. I'd like suggestions and maybe some ideas for a title.
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