Writing progress (P3)

By Charisma · Apr 2, 2008 · 657 · 4
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  1. SONGS

    1. I know
      • Age: 13
      • Published: No
      • Progress: Completed
      • Speed: Slow
      • Chorus:
        Because I know...*short humming*
        And I know I'm right and I won't stop...*humming*
      • Other: Posted in Review Room.
    2. Maybe
      • Age: 13
      • Published: No
      • Progress: Completed
      • Speed: Slow
      • Chorus:
        Maybe *short echo*
        I've never seen
        What you have *short beat*
        Maybe *short echo*
        I could be better off...
        Making friends with you now... *beat*
      • Other: none.
    3. Right here, right now
      • Age: 14
      • Published: No
      • Progress: Completed
      • Speed: Medium
      • Chorus:
        Right here right now
        Do you realize?
        Of ALL the things...
        Oh...
      • Other: none.
    4. Somewhere near
      • Age: 14
      • Published: No
      • Progress: Completed
      • Speed: Medium
      • Chorus:
        So listen up
        Someone I know
        Someone I care for
        Is somewhere near
        If I could hug her I would do it for sure
      • Other: For my best friend Kulsoom (or Katz, as she calls herself).
    5. The clouds are cryin'
      • Age: 14
      • Published: No
      • Progress: Completed
      • Speed: Medium
      • Chorus:
        The clouds are cryin'
        My heart out
        I don't even have the right
        To express my doubt
      • Other: Posted in the Review Room.
    6. Do you think I'm crazy?
      • Age: 14
      • Published: No
      • Progress: Completed
      • Speed: Jumping speeds - Slow to Medium to Fast
      • Chorus:
        Do you think I'm crazy? *two beats*
        Do you think I've lost it? *two beats*
        Think again
        'Cause you are de-a-a-a-a-ad wrong!
      • Other: Posted in the Review Room.
    7. Heartless (1) Slow version
      • Age: 15
      • Published: No
      • Progress: Completed
      • Speed: Slow
      • Chorus:
        Heartless, heartless
        Is what I call him
        Dying each never feeling a thing
        One day will come
        When it's too late
        His tears would fill up the dried Euphrates
      • Other: Posted in the Review Room.
    8. Not yet deprived of hope
      • Age: 15
      • Published: No
      • Progress: Completed
      • Speed: Medium
      • Chorus:
        Because I'm
        Not yet deprived of hope
        Let my pain just elope
        I know I'm not turning to stone
        Not yet deprived of hope
      • Other: Posted in the Review Room.
    9. Tell me why
      • Age: 15
      • Published: No
      • Progress: Completed
      • Speed: Fast (I'm so happy I've written a proper fast song!)
      • Chorus:
        Tell me why!
        My soul's going up the sky
        Tell me...tell me why!
        I just wanna cry n' cry
        Tell me why!
      • Other: Posted in the Review Room.
    10. My life
      • Age: 15
      • Published: No
      • Progress: Completed
      • Speed: Medium
      • Chorus:
        Oh my *two beats*
        You're right *two beats*
        My life
      • Other: Posted in the Review Room.
    11. Feeling my demise
      • Age: 15
      • Published: No
      • Progress: Completed
      • Speed: Fast
      • Chorus:
        Feeling my demise
        I feel so undone *choral tune commences and ends before next verse*
        Take my heart back
        But unlock this dungeon *choral tune commences*
      • Other: Posted in the Review Room. AND MY FAVORITE SONG EVER!!! ;)
    12. I ask you, O God
      • Age: 15
      • Published: No
      • Progress: Completed
      • Speed: Medium
      • Chorus:
        Rotten in my own self
        I ask you, O God
        Why is man so blind and deaf
        And why, am I not
      • Other: Posted in Review Room.
    13. God has come home
      • Age: 15
      • Published: No
      • Progress: Completed
      • Speed: Medium
      • Chorus:
        Hugging my soul, once more
        I feel
        The truth bequeath hope
        Slaughtering my hate, once more
        I feel
        God has come home
      • Other: Posted in Review Room. And I really like it.
    14. Ne ne Nai na
      • Age: 15
      • Published: No
      • Progress: Completed
      • Speed: Fast
      • Chorus:
        Ne ne ne ne Nai na...Na-i-na!
        Someday you will finally get it!
        Feelin' kickin' lickin'...round up!
        Don't feel like a misfit!
      • Other: Posted in Review Room.
    15. Where am I
      • Age: 15
      • Published: No
      • Progress: Completed
      • Speed: Medium
      • Chorus:
        Where, am I?
        Where is your creamy smile?
        Where, is life?
        When you are no longer mine
      • Other: Posted in Review Room.
    16. Flea to Adam
      • Age: 15
      • Published: No
      • Progress: Completed
      • Speed: Medium
      • Chorus:
        Give me some more, Adam!
        Give me some more pain!
        I want to see why you are literate
        And I am not
      • Other: Posted in Review Room.
    17. Let the rebirth begin
      • Age: 15
      • Published: No
      • Progress: Completed
      • Speed: Slow
      • Chorus:
        Let my soul go home
        Let it face the cold
        Let the pain finally kill me
        Let the rebirth begin!
      • Other: Posted in Review Room.
    18. Power of the green
      • Age: First draft at 13, but redid at 15.
      • Published: No
      • Progress: Completed
      • Speed: Slow
      • Chorus:
        You had the power of the green...
        You've had what it takes to be...
      • Other: none.
    19. Desperate
      • Age: First draft at 13, redid at 15.
      • Published: No
      • Progress: Completed
      • Speed: Slow
      • Chorus:
        Everything I say
        Slipping off and away
        Tell you what, I'm desperate
        Because you've never said the words *humming*
      • Other: none.
    20. Mad
      • Age: First draft at 13, redid at 15.
      • Published: No
      • Progress: Completed
      • Speed: Medium
      • Chorus:
        I'm going mad *short beat*
        And I don't want to stop *short beat*
        It's better than to be a normal girl *beat*
      • Other: none.
    21. Alive
      • Age: 15
      • Published: No
      • Progress: Completed
      • Speed: Fast
      • Chorus:
        Alive
        I'm feeling so alive
        Erupting new youth
        Placating pain
        I'm becoming alive
        Alive
        Now accept my true vibe
      • Other: Posted in the Review Room.
    22. Live forever
      • Age: 15
      • Published: No
      • Progress: Completed
      • Speed: Medium
      • Chorus:
        It isn't over
        Unless you've won
        It hasn't started
        Unless you've lost...
        Play this gamble
        Now or never
        Shut down your evil
        And live forever
      • Other: Posted in the Review Room. And I like it a lot.
    23. He's there
      • Age: 15
      • Published: No
      • Progress: Completed
      • Speed: Slow
      • Chorus:
        He's there
        I know
        I can breathe, he's there
        He still loves me
        I know
        I can live, he's there
      • Other: Posted in the Review Room.
    24. Want to be alive (First English song ever...)
      • Age: First draft at the age of 13, redid at 15
      • Published: No
      • Progress: Completed
      • Speed: Medium
      • Chorus:
        Want to be alive *beat*
        Want to live a life no fears...want to...rejuvenate
        Oh yeah ahaan...
      • Other: none.
    25. Grab the moment
      • Age: 15
      • Published: No
      • Progress: Completed
      • Speed: Slow
      • Chorus:
        You never know
        The light
        Until it’s gone
        When the seconds, glide
        And grow into hours
      • Other: none.
    26. Embrace the truth
      • Age: 15
      • Published: No
      • Progress: Completed
      • Speed: Medium
      • Chorus:
        Voices have no ambi-ance
        When in hearts is si-e-lence
        Breathing cannot con-tinue
        When in souls is vio-e-lence
        *choral tune starts*
      • Other: Posted in the Review Room.
    27. Fight Back
      • Age: 15
      • Published: No
      • Progress: Completed
      • Speed: Medium
      • Chorus:
        Do you think I've lost? *two beats*
        Everything and everyone
        Well yeah
        That ain't meanin' you have won
        Hell yeah
        We're jus' startin' to have some fun
      • Other: Posted in the Review Room.
    28. Motto of a Patriot
      • Age: 15
      • Published: No
      • Progress: Completed
      • Speed: Slow
      • Chorus:
        Let us burn as we try
        But don’t let this passion die
        Hummari jaan chali jayay
        Magar yay aag na jayay
        (Let our life go
        But don’t let this fire go out)
      • Other: Posted in the Review Room.
    29. Internal Rebirth
      • Age: 15
      • Published: No
      • Progress: Completed
      • Speed: Medium
      • Chorus:
        (I wouldn't call it a chorus, despite it's repetition, because it doesn't convey the message, but here it is):
        Better than breathing
        If I must receive your hate
        Better than living
        If I must live a Muslim's fate
      • Other: Posted in my blog in this section.
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  1. Charisma
    Ah...out of space, ain't I? Thereby, I declare new songs will be in new comments.

    30. Tearing my wound
    • Age: 15
    • Published: No
    • Progress: Completed
    • Speed: Medium to Fast
    • Chorus:
      Tearing my wound
      Feeling such ceremonious joy
      The emotions around
      Breaking up devil’s special ploy
      Let me tear it up!
    • Other: Posted in the Review Room.
    31. Move it
    • Age: 15
    • Published: No
    • Progress: Completed
    • Speed: Medium to Fast
    • Chorus:
      Hope is not, waiting for things to happen
      Hope is making those things happen
      To polish your heart
      Fulfilling the unknown
      Never to refrain
      From taking the strain
    • Other: Posted in the First Ever Lyrical Contest on this site.
    33. My friend at Brooklyn Lane
    • Age: 15
    • Published: No
    • Progress: Completed
    • Speed: Fast
    • Chorus:
      Darlin'...
      When I look at you, you look like a freak
      Your dresses are few and your taste simply reeks
      Your sandals, your bags and all your stuff
      To cope up with you, is just so tough
      But darlin'
      That's what I like about you
    • Other: Posted in the Review Room.
    34. The Mother
    • Age: 15
    • Published: No
    • Progress: Completed
    • Speed: Slow
    • Chorus:
      You can hide from me
      You can kill the memory
      Of being related to me
      But you can never kill
      The mother in me
    • Other: Posted in the Review Room. And I really, really loved it.
    Charisma, Apr 27, 2008
  2. Charisma
    35. Whatever Our Faith May Be
    • Age: 15
    • Published: No
    • Progress: Completed
    • Speed: Medium
    • Chorus:
      Why is it 'you' and 'me'?
      Why isn't it just 'we'?
      What can't we be brothers and sisters
      Whatever our faith may be
    • Other: Posted in my blog.
    36. Your face
    • Age: 15
    • Published: No
    • Progress: Completed
    • Speed: Slow
    • Chorus:
      Because I know
      I'm still alive because of God's grace
      But for life to sustain
      I must reach your face
    • Other: Lost the scrap of paper I wrote it on. :( Just why I always use the computer!
    37. Prayer of an Amnesic
    • Age: 15
    • Published: No
    • Progress: Completed
    • Speed: Medium
    • Chorus:
      Let me, not forget
      This day
      The day, I'll drive my fears away
      And cry, for mercy
      And cry, for a time
      I could forget all
      But this day
    • Other: Posted in the Review Room.
    Charisma, May 24, 2008
  3. Charisma
    Wow, been a while I updated.

    38. Come Live Your Life
    • Age: 15
    • Published: No
    • Progress: Completed
    • Speed: Fast-Medium
    • Chorus:
      Come live your life
      Already, alright!
      Come hold my hands
      And repair your heart
    • Other: Posted in the Review Room.
    39. Dear hubby
    • Age: 15
    • Published: No
    • Progress: Completed
    • Speed: Medium
    • Chorus:
      Grow old and grow on
      It doesn't change a thing about you
      I will remain the young beautiful girl
      As long as you want me to
    • Other: Posted in the Review Room.
    40. Imagine again
    • Age: 15
    • Published: No
    • Progress: Completed
    • Speed: Medium
    • Chorus:
      Imagine again
      My lovely
      Your dreams prancing with you
      Imagine again and again and again
      Until you're sure of this beautiful you
    • Other: Posted in the Review Room.
    41. Mayday
    • Age: 15
    • Published: No
    • Progress: Completed
    • Speed: Medium
    • Chorus:
      You do not know
      You cannot know
      Mayday!
      It ain’t alright
      It ain’t okay
      MAYDAY!
    • Other: Posted in the Review Room. And I likey it. :D
    42. You haunt me
    • Age: 15
    • Published: No
    • Progress: Completed
    • Speed: Slow
    • Chorus:
      You haunt me
      When you tell me
      That love is an illusion
      You no longer see
      That this life is just confusion
      With no joy and glee
    • Other: Posted in the Review Room.
    43. Survival of the optimistic
    • Age: 15
    • Published: No
    • Progress: Completed
    • Speed: Medium
    • Chorus:
      Here is our aureole
      Dusty and cremated
      We will build our life
      With lemons life created
    • Other: Posted in the Review Room.
    44. Why things go wrong
    • Age: 15
    • Published: No
    • Progress: Completed
    • Speed: Medium
    • Chorus:
      Why things go wrong
      Why does life test you on and on
      If you think this world will remain
      Forgetting the trap of death
      And the true domain
      The pain will be long
    • Other: Posted in the Review Room.
    45. Death is the dance
    • Age: 15
    • Published: No
    • Progress: Completed
    • Speed: Medium
    • Chorus:
      Even the silence has some game
      It mesmerizes my faithful side
      You might never understand
      That this life is transient
      But death is the dance
    • Other: Posted in the Review Room.
    46. Life will end tonight
    • Age: 15
    • Published: No
    • Progress: Completed
    • Speed: Medium
    • Chorus:
      Life will end tonight
      Unless you know
      That life is not just strife
      You slip
      You fight
      You roll
      You win
      The night
      Until you reach the peak of glory
      You're fallin'
      Yet you glide
      Up and live this life
    • Other: Posted in the Review Room.
    Charisma, Aug 14, 2008
  4. Charisma
    47. Paradise
    • Age: 15
    • Published: No
    • Progress: Completed
    • Speed: Fast-Medium
    • Chorus:
      If your paradise goes
      Will you let me out?
      Sweetie that's not how it works
      Heaven's not my plead
      I live because its written down
      Every word that I speak
      Is my God's own sound
    • Other: Posted in the Review Room.
    48. Get Up Now
    • Age: 15
    • Published: No
    • Progress: Completed
    • Speed: Medium
    • Chorus:
      Where is the door
      Which takes me away from me
      Where is the light
      You often spoke of
      All I see in my sight
      That I myself am the night
    • Other: Posted in the Review Room.
    49. Colors
    • Age: 15
    • Published: No
    • Progress: Completed
    • Speed: Fast
    • Chorus:
      Can you see the
      Colors of my soul
      It's a turmoil
      But I'm not still sure

      Only my heart
      Can make me whole
      Only the truth
      Can make me see

      Can you see the
      Colors of my soul
      It's a turmoil
      But I'm not still sure
    • Other: Posted in the Review Room.
    Charisma, Sep 8, 2008
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