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You know who you are:

Published by Jarren Dunn in the blog Jarren Dunn's blog. Views: 148

You're a little boy
Always taking things too far
Feels like a no one
But acts like he's a star

What will you do
When loneliness sinks in
Can you except
The bottle is your only friend

Its a short one. Could use some work I think, but for a table scrap beginning of a song, I'm proud of it. I was going to write more, but I can't seem to find words to keep the emotion flowing well.
Lemme know what ya think!
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