50% think its too slow. 50% don't, is that right? Is the 50% who think its too slow not into reading (your genre)? Are the 50% who don't think...
It actually sounds like you are done. Your story is basically Lost, the television series. That is not a criticism. You've got a mysterious...
I don't think the problem is that it is "archaic." First paragraph of Mountains of Madness (by Lovecraft) below. "I am forced into speech...
If the author was striving for word economy, maybe they should not have included the bird at all. Find something else that both forwards the plot...
I think the core of your message is inspiring. How many hours of writing do you aim for daily?
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