As I'm correcting my first rough draft, and had a slight change how the story ends in a way. I simply had two characters found a thing for each...
I was in the Army for five years as a grunt, and was airborne. In basic training, people quit by the handful during red phase, they just couldn't...
I'm in the same boat. I feel as if training entire month for selection in my book bogs down the pace of the plot. During training he learns more...
Do I use the same dialogue rules when a character speaking in their thoughts just as someone speaking out loud? I have my characters talking,...
I thought about other assaults, or just avoid the whole scene entirely. I just wanted to put the character in a situation, in a dire need to save...
Well, MC friend disrespected one of the guards, earlier during the screening process and he sent his regards for disrespect. I don't go into...
Majority of my scenes takes place in a prison. The MC stops a rape from happening to his only friend in the shower. Basically, some inmates paid...
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