Unhappy endings are good as long as the ending makes sense. Also don't make it stupidly sad. Don't just stick a sad ending just so you want your...
I am writing kind of the same thing about mu character except she quit drawing and the hero helps her overcome it and she is also clinically...
I understand what you are saying. You obviously want something subtle, how about letting the two of them going to some party and he tells her she...
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