Excellent! I just posted something of mine in the novels section actually. Hope to see some of your work :D
Hey! From one newcomer to another, hello. Sadly, I'm not a warlock but I'd be glad to help you with your writing. I also like dogs.
My instinct would be to go for the second one, since it makes the reveal that much more impactful for the reader. However it is indeed important...
Separate names with a comma.