Everyone covetously stared at her as she entered the café, sporting a Carolina blue dress. I caught a whiff of her perfume as she pushed back her...
I would go with zzzzzzzzzz!
I don't if this works:
I leaned in close to inhale her scent. Her perfume was luscious, something light, something lovely and lemony.
We were walking on the beach, the soft sand swallowing our steps. On the left, the sounds of the jungle cut through the night. The birds, the...
I came up with this:
A wild winter wind was rattling the wet window of his worn-out hut.
I would go with "the youth".
It has apostrophe in dictionaries:
Other than upbringing, the surroundings should be taken into account. The impact of the environment in which children are raised should not be...
I remember once I saw a quote from Napoleon at the beginning of a book. It was all in italic and no quotation marks. Your situation is different...
Yes it's better now.
When I browse the forum without logging in, the forum is fine. But after I log in, the forum becomes painfully slow to browse. Has...
My two scents: you don't need to capitalize after colon. You can look at books by famous authors. They don't capitalize after colon.
Background is also important. Was she always homeless or did she become a homeless person after things happened. If she used to live in a home,...
Thank you so much. :superagree:
I once heard G string in a TV show. I thought they said jittering. It happened a long time ago, though.
Separate names with a comma.