I think people read series because they fall in love with the characters, and so long as the characters stay true and the story is entertaining,...
great advice! just what i was looking for- thanks to all! i will go over my work and edit the adverbs, cut down on the modifiers like you...
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I have come to realize I tend to write overly flowery descriptions. I want to describe the sights, smells, sounds, etc. in a poetic and beautiful...
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