It's gripping but it's still ruff. In the first sentence I'm wondering who "she" is... you may want to tell us her name and what relationship she...
Is this good?- I finally bought my own AT guide, which I totally should have had from the start. With it I know when I pass the four-hundred mile...
Every woman that I know has been romantic at one time or another. I’ve even received a dozen red roses from a woman who wanted to date me… not the...
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