That would make Magnolia's sacrifice so much more tragic, since it's done in vain, which I think would work well. Or this! This would be an...
To start, I love your story premise. It's very light-natured and fanciful, and I think its a nice change from the overwhelming presence of gritty...
I love that excerpt, it definitely allows for the reader to relate to the character more after offering some explanation. Again, some people have...
Thank you! Thanks! I hope it draws some attention! Herpetoculture is basically the hobby keeping and breeding of reptiles. Stated above, I have...
I saw the RPG forum! I was eying it up a lil haha... But yeah, some video games are really great inspiration for writing. I love Skyrim, and right...
Chameleons are the absolute cutest! I love them, we see babies all the time at the reptile store we go to. I have 2 snakes (ball python and...
I think a nice way to allow readers to empathize with your character is to offer some level of explanation behind their actions. You don't gotta...
Ay yall, I'm Madison/apollonaris. I didn't know if I was cool enough to hang out here so I spent a few weeks perusing/stalking before going "#yolo...
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