It's a great point. I never looked it that way. Rookie Mistake! I guess, this would help me trim down the movements a lot. And thanks a lot,...
Exactly. How to bring that fluency? As I mentioned in my earlier reply: My issue is: My characters are moving around a lot. And they are always...
I understand what you said, Storysmith. My issue is: My characters are moving around a lot. And they are always looking for a place to sit (chair,...
I notice there are too many unnecessary actions in my scenes. The most common are: 1. When a character moves from one place to another. e.g. He...
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