If you want to write a good fight scene, I think you should write with short, action-packed sentences. Don't use padding words like well, sort of,...
You could also try using description to show that the secondary character -- let's still call him Cutter -- isn't all that your MC says he is. You...
Hi there, I'm a writer from Australia who is exploring forums to get some input from fellow writers. I like writing fantasy, sci-fi and horror --...
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