Thanks for the feedback but in all fairness i did write it in about 10 minutes so yeah normally my stories are better set out and better worded.
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If you say I'm strange, I'll reply no I'm just different. If you say I'm unfunny, I'll say no I have an original sense of humor. If you say I'm...
Heya I'm not really new at writing but I am new at this (being the forum) I'm about quater of the way through a novel I'm writing but I have a...
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