Something that hasn't come up in this discussion is the use of the dialogue itself to show who is speaking. I was once told by a mentor that...
As was mentioned above, critiquing is an individual art, and you must develop your own style. That being said, it can't hurt to try to point you...
There was a book that I once read that was a part of a series that may be of use to you. The series is called the Spellsong Cycle, and the author...
I would propose a different solution entirely. Simply write the "truth" (the truth being what actually happened and the persons mental and...
Hello there, my name is Steve. My interests include writing (mostly fictional prose), playing madden (NFL video game), following american...
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