Thank you @ChickenFreak and @TheRealStegblob I'll definitely make the changes in the sentences while thinking about all that you've said. Writing...
“Rose I know where you are,” said Dylan saying my name like you would a very long music lyric or note. I was sitting against the wall hugging my...
I need another word for "and" because my mom said when she read the first chapter of my book she noticed I used a lot of and(s). How do I stray...
Does drinking help you write better? Does drinking put you in the mood to write? Have you ever tried writing while drunk? Is it good or bad to...
So for anyone who writes a book and gets it critiqued know's what to expect. I want to get my book critiqued by the chapter but after I see all...
The prologue in my book is how my main character's "parents" came to meet. In my book Lucifer was attracted to a normal girl with brown hair and...
Hmmm, maybe I'll write the prologue later because I'm so focused on the book I was lazy about writing the prologue. I'll change it to first...
So in my novel, for my prologue I ended up writing it in the third person point of view. Then when Chapter One comes to play I switched it to...
I d I do like Orca's Bite.
Thanks for the information @DueNorth I've been to Friday Harbor, and San Juan Islands. Wish I could go there again.
Well when you put it that way, I think we have a winner for the name. Thank you good sir.
Separate names with a comma.