“There was nothing wrong with your foot when you started that fight at the Three Moons Tavern.” Rai et Bashiana, Force Leader of his troop spoke....
"Act like who you mean to be, Bhryen, and no one will get in your way. Trust me on that. " From my novel, The Dragonglass Bowl.
Who fights the final battle? It could be an actual fight or throwing the ring into the fire as in The Lord of the Rings. It would be the final...
If your MC is well loved in book 1, your readers would want him or her to be redeemed. Perhaps add a little hope that that is possible? Sometimes...
Great reply. Thank you for sharing
I prefer the third person only because of the different POVs. This way, you get to see the protagonist from another's POV. I like the...
I think if something of a character's name gives a hint to his or her character, it is a great way for the reader to keep the character in mind....
Using a different POV is the easiest, I think. However, having too many POVs can be confusing. Choose a group of characters that you want to tell...
Seems like your main character is a loner. That can be a good ending, - her refusal to change. Like a gunfighter walking off into the sunset. That...
We are all apprentices in a craft where no one ever becomes a master.” ― Ernest Hemingway, The Wild Year I loved this one.
Sounds great. Go for it. You have created the suspense to set up the flashback. Just write it then you can tighten it up later once it's done.
I love reading books with multiple characters. It expands the story world and makes it more interesting for me. WOT is a good example of multiple...
How long is the story? Two paragraphs? or More? I had to do something similar in my story. What I did was to leave a hint at an incident in the...
LOL. Yes, that happened to me. I now keep a glossary so I can go back to see the names of my characters. Learned that the hard way as I was...
Yes. good reasons to have them.
Separate names with a comma.
