Regarding the comma comment- In this context, there shouldn't be a comma after 'three', because in this sentence the phrase 'twelve-year cycle'...
I agree that they're fine, but do use them relatively sparingly. Four in a row might be a bit much, IMO, especially if you're going to have only...
Cheers, Banzai
There's nothing wrong with going with Adam. Especially with all the religious themes in your story, I think the biblical reference will be...
All of the ideas suggested are good, but to make them even better--and make sure your story has something different--try and add a personal...
Welcome! You sound just like me, actually--lots of ideas, never sticking one out to the end. My kind of girl, haha. By all means try and gleam...
Hi! Welcome. I'm a newb, too (we've got to stick together!) Haha, I just googled 'Olivetti 40'--what a beautiful machine! You should keep using...
lol, thanks! I try. :)
Hi, guys. I'm catchkatch, one of the newest noobs on the site. I'm here because I'm an aspiring novelist and would love some feedback and help...
Separate names with a comma.