One more question: in my novel, the protagonist family goes through a tour of a science facility. The tour guide explains some scientific stuff...
Hi everyone! My screen name is char99bok, but you can call me Eddie. :D I've been lurking around for a little while, soaking up some of the...
Sounds like mammamaia knows what she's talking about. ;) Thank you for the advice. I trimmed the info dumps and even went through my story...
Thank you for the comments, everyone! Especially your critiques, bluebell. I guess since it's my first draft, I can kind of get away with info...
I think I might have committed one a few times. Here is a segment where I think I might have info dumped. Please, everyone, let me know what you...
Well, at least I understand what an info dump is now. Thank you for the help, everyone! I guess the hard part is whether or not I'm committing...
After some time lurking, I've finally decided to post. I've seen people refer to "info dumps". I've googled this, tried to figure out what...
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