I had a similiar problem in a current wip. I tried to write it by including a human that had no knowledge of the world they got sucked into. It...
you could always do something with poisoning or perhaps they have an organ that cleanses the magic flow (kidneys?) that if impaired in some way...
I usually don't mind time skips. In fact, sometimes they pan out much better than having to trudge through dull chapters. But as far as skipping...
There's nothing wrong with a healty dose of HP fanfic. I wrote my fare share back in the day and, especially when using OC's, it can be a great...
I agree with cogito as far as practicing critiques...looking over someone elses work that you arent so invested in puts a little bit of distance...
I think it will be an interesting twist...but, i'm one of those readers that like a few hints about something that major. You don't have to...
I agree with what has been said about using technology and architecture to change up the setting. I've used both those things to purposefully...
I'm doing this in my current project. I switch between a few characters, and one of them is closely associated with the villian. I wanted the...
I love my characters...even the evil villians and scumbags. I think I get attached because I know everything about them; every intimate detail;...
As a reader, I would probably be annoyed. If its central to the character's identity, it seems like it would come up in a concrete way (not just...
For me, I've learned to accept the fact that I'm probably going to hate my first draft of a piece. Especially if its something I've been holding...
This does see like an unusual way to commit suicide...but that makes me intrigued about your character and the state he is in. Especially...
I love it when a book takes a relatively well known concept or object and puts a unique spin on it. I say run with it.
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