"Now, before I gut you, I've one last question, and you don't have to answer, because, quite frankly, I don't much care what you have to say. So,...
I have a good example I think. Lauren saves a man from being mugged: This is the first time she really gets to utilize her new Vampyric abilities...
This may seem like a no-brainer for some folks here, but I have to ask for help here. I've been through about 3 drafts of 4 different fights that...
one of the main characters die. The monster hunter who buried Lauren alive allows himself to die. He realizes that, as long as he lives, she'll...
Lauren, the main character, trying to influence/intimidate a sickly familiar (human working for Vampyres) into giving her vital information she...
are members of this forum allowed to bump topics/threads? If so, then I'd appreciate any feedback at all
I'm not nearly confident or experienced enough to try and pull off a dream sequence, but if you're a seasoned and/or talented writer, I think it...
[IMG] well, dang...'cause I certainly deleted that entire piece of dialogue on my own script document
1. yes, you're correct, that is what I meant. She wanted to make her dying father a Vampyre so she wouldn't lose him. Her brother and stepmother...
making tracks is correct, I meant turn him as in make him a Vampyre. and she has some bank accounts and funds still remaining from her time in...
I don't see it as particularly weird if what you're asking is regarding them dating their dead friend's sister. But I'm still kinda unclear as to...
So, my main character is dealing with a very traumatic experience that's broken her as a person (er...Vampyre) and twisted her into someone driven...
Still want it gone...
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