Well, the story has some elements of a mystery, and one of the important occurences needed in order to make it complete is a rather hushed up one....
I would start with fleshing out the mystery, then the characters, then the clues, then the plot, but everyone go about things differently.
I'm currently writing a period novel, in which the character is narrating the story some time after. I have reached a point in the story where...
Wouldn't it be easier to simply alternate the perspectives in chapters?
I would add a few sentences to connect the pages. Such as something like; 'The rest of the week was spent in a mindless blur ' However, if...
In my opinion,you should spread the alliteration throughout the speech. Otherwise people will stop focusing on the meaning and just count the...
Are these seperate scenes with the same characters? In the same setting?
Separate names with a comma.