The first plot line is a tear jerker meant to emotionally manipulate the reader - unless the real aim of the story is to describe how the daughter...
He might have some visa problems. How long has he been in France ;)
The problems disguised are all to do with sentence structure. Perhaps you're trying to cram too many ideas into a structure, or the tense/time...
Before the rain turned the dirt to mud, she had walked over the path cleanly Nothing wrong with commas - but make sure you know where you want...
I'm female, and I hate Virgina Woolf. Her style of writing makes me feel sick. I got part of the way through to the Lighthouse. It was as dull as...
I instantly thought it was rather clever - but I didn't enjoy reading it, I found it pretty dull. I just couldn't get to like any of the...
I would not class Anne Rice novels as romances, although certain of the books have romantic threads (Blood and Gold with Marius and Pandora etc)....
In a way if I do become a successful writer - or successful at anything - I don't neccessarily want to be known for posts on writing forums. It's...
Alternatively nothing is original - not really, parts will always be derivative. After all we didn't invent the language itself. But why worry?...
A knowledge of depression is certainly helpful. I would say it wouldn't be the same without it - making it up will often appear shallow, even if...
Separate names with a comma.