All of my books stand alone. This is the second book. I don't recap anything. Actually, I never like recapping. I think what I was trying to...
I second this. Actually, the reason the war hasn't started is because I needed a few check-ups between the past of a main character. The person is...
Thank you everyone for your response. I think at this point i have decided to finish the story, from beginning to end. Later, when I go back and...
The character is medically trained. He knows pain patterns all too well due to previous encounters. The reason I was hoping for a through and...
This is not true. I never said the wounded character didn't know medical practices. Also, I can point to where my spleen is. If blood is gushing...
This is not the first book. The first one was 120,000 words... This is the second one. What I am really afraid of is the huge time gap between the...
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Simple and quick? :D I'll leave the medical stuff to those who know more, but I'll just mention a couple of things. Firstly, by "main base of the...
This is what I am looking for! Is there a way I can have the bullet miss spleen, but make it look like it hit? Like deceive a character that knows...
I've been working on a project for about two years now. It hasn't occurred to me until after I wrote about 14 chapters in that I hit the 400 page...
All right, I'm going to make this post simple and quick. Basically, I have a current notion on a wound for one of my characters. Originally it was...
Oops! dititig! I appologize! I never really realized that I wrote that punctuation wrong! I seem to just fly by when I open quote end quote... Let...
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