That's really interesting! Being a woman I'm very offput by the stereotype that all women love the color pink. I have nothing against the color...
I'd really be interested in reading that! Lately I've been working on different types of characters and points of view and this just sounds...
I think if you're going to add a page dedicated to names and their pronunciations it should be at the beginning of the book. That way the reader...
Women love "girly things" frills, kittens, the color pink, getting their nails done, makeup etc. Women aren't good at sports and don't know...
Separate names with a comma.