Yes, I've noticed that I've tended to fault towards describing almost every movement made while someone is talking. It probably counts as padding,...
Lately I've been writing a few stories where one character has been the one talking for the bulk of the scene, and I kind of would like a opinion...
I guess what I'm trying to look for is a opinion on a clear sentence structure. What I mean is this: She said. He said. She did. He did....
I've noticed that I tend to use the same three-step paragraph structure whenever a character is in a conversation then does action or vice-versa....
Recently, I've been wondering if my writing has become imbalanced. Particularly concerning when it comes to describing a conversation between...
Is it better to do it like this? Where the conversation begins and ends the same paragraph? "All set my boy." he replied, almost hissing the...
Yes! That will do! Thanks man!
Well I'll give a example. What would I say if a character runs through a doorway only to get clotheslined by someone standing around the other...
What I'm looking for here is a list of words that describe a reaction to getting hit, or shot, or injured in anyway. I keep going back to using...
Separate names with a comma.