I like this one, heh.
Ohh I like the idea of the character telling the past. Very nice!
You could put something between Priscilla and Davis. Priscilla ____ Davis. I think it would look nice. That way maybe you could even have some...
If you're writing from the first-person, by definition, you can only realize and imply things that your character can, as well. Unless you give...
"Oh, but yes... Death comes for us all." - Demetrius Della Rosa There was a little context which I put here :D:...
You could start with some kind of flashback. Maybe some relevant moment that tells the reader something interesting about your character, and that...
The Apprentice, Both civilizations were already settled, though in early stages, when the humans arrived. They already had their weapons and...
Vendor76, I did consider your idea and it was in fact much interesting. I even believe it can possibly give a great plot for the future. However,...
They would later be defined by the humans as Empyreals and Cyclopeans. And as far as yin and yang go, I guess you could say that. You know, good...
First off, hey there! How you doing? :) I've been working on this fiction story that passes in a new world. Humans still exist, but they've been...
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