In this game we are presented with a introduction to a character and by using our collective uniqueness, guide them down a road no ONE individual...
I have three characters that need completed introductions; Jenn, Lynn, and Ashe. Provided is a chapter title and a few sentences for inspiration....
Critiques are opinions, in my opinion.
A fantasy that has not been written about. Go!
Uh, write more and encourage others to write more. This too shall pass.
Good and great are subjective to each reader. Its believable that 10 people can fall outside your stories target audience. Keep searching.
Stop trying to write it for the time being. Use other mediums to capture the ideas. Only pick up the pen and paper when you feel comfortable.
Ha, mix it up then. Throw a little dnd dice rolling action into your story plot-lining.
Separate names with a comma.