Hello, hello! I've finished the first of a mafia-comedy series in 1930s New York. It's the first, a pilot if you will, of a short series. However!...
Yes! All very true. Do you have any thoughts on what I can do to show it?
I’ve got a side character that self harms. I will be honest—it’s not something I have written before (closest is just self destructive...
Thank you! That’s a very good point. I’d imagine she would also probably be DEVASTATED if she were to realize that her standards are unrealistic...
No need to feel self conscious— this is a very insightful take. Thank you for taking the time to write it. You point out a thing a I didn’t think...
That’s a really good point! Written out like this she does feel like a stick in the mud to have around. I’ll have to rework things a bit to play...
The deuteragonist of my story is a big moral absolutist. She’s the moral compass of the friend group and the wide eyed idealist. Save the whales,...
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